50-word story

It was close to dawn as I ran. I could hear nothing but the sound of my own breathing –or panting should I say, and my heart beating strongly against my chest, seeing tree after tree as I ran past. I couldn't hear him, but I knew he was right behind me, waiting for the moment when my knees failed me and I fell helpless on the ground. I turned to see –running still, but there was nothing. I eased to a walk and looked around cautiously. A hand on my shoulder, and I knew it was the end.
"Tag, you're it."

Word count: 102.

The sun was rising and all I could hear was my panting, my heart beating against my chest and the leaves as I dashed past them. I couldn't see him, but I knew he was right behind me, waiting for the moment my knees failed me. I turned to see as I eased to a walk, but there was nothing. I looked around cautiously. A hand on my shoulder, and I knew that was the end.
"Tag, you're it"

Word count: 79

-Sigh- Only 29 words to go.

The rays of dawn seemed to make the sound of the leaves louder as I dashed past them. My breathing was short, making me pant. He was right behind me, I couldn't slow down, but I couldn't hear him. I eased to a walk and looked around. A hand on my shoulder and I knew that was the end.
"Tag, you're it"

Word count: 62

OMG, THIS IS SO FRUSTRATING

Birds had begun singing, making it harder for me to hear him. I knew he was right behind me, but I slowed down anyway –I needed to make sure. I looked around me cautiously, but there was nothing. A hand on my shoulder suddenly told me it was the end.
"Tag, you're it"

Word count: 53

UGH. 3 words over the limit,
AND I DON'T LIKE IT ANYWAY!!

The sun was rising and my legs were getting numb from running. He was too close, I couldn't hear him, but I knew it. I eased to a walk anyway, and looked around cautiously. A hand on my shoulder, and I knew it was the end.
"Tag, you're it."

Word count: 49

YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! NOW I'M SHORT IN WORDS.

The sun was rising and the rays warmed my face as I ran. I couldn't hear him, but I knew he was right behind me. I eased to a walk, being unable to hear him. I looked around –nothing. A hand on my shoulder, and I knew it was the end.
"Tag, you're it"

Word count: 54

The rays of sunlight in my face warmed me as I ran. I couldn't hear him, but I knew he was right behind me. I eased to a walk, I needed to make sure. I looked around –nothing. A hand on my shoulder told me it was the end.
"Tag, you're it."

Word count: 52

The sunlight on my face told me it was almost over. I couldn't hear him, but I knew he was too close. I eased to a walk –I needed to be sure. I looked around –nothing. A Hand on my shoulder, I knew it was the end.
"Tag, you're it."

Word count: 50

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OMGGGGGGGGGGG

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I MADE IT!

OMGOMGOMGOMOGM

AHAHHAHAHAH!!

OMGGGGGGG!
AHAHHA
I MADE IT!

WHOOHOO!!!